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Gack.

Any advice for writing under-age bad sex? Yes, it really needs to be in there. No, it is not fun to write. I feel sorry for both of them.

Brought to you by stressing over the slave-fic. :)


I'm doing great, though. I don't think I've written this much, this quickly, in a while. Feels good. Makes me want to try and poke at some of the other ideas in my head! It's such a battle, my friends:

Write whacky, creepy, RPS porn, or spend time with the grandchild. Ach, talk about a dilemma!

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write_light
Nov. 21st, 2018 05:04 am (UTC)
underage bad sex:
rushing
doing what *you* want not what *they* need
doing just one thing you did before that worked before
bumping/banging/ouch
premature anything/everything
zits
roxymissrose
Nov. 21st, 2018 05:11 am (UTC)
Dang...that's so perfect, I kinda wish I could just use *that*. :D
write_light
Nov. 21st, 2018 05:15 am (UTC)
Make it a checklist XD
One can use it on the other.
write_light
Nov. 21st, 2018 05:44 am (UTC)
OR YOU KNOW, THIS GEM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nkjjtX83-Cc

XD XD XD
roxymissrose
Nov. 22nd, 2018 03:04 am (UTC)
Oh my GOD!!! HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! This is too damn good! I will hold this in my mind for any and all future HS AUs!! :D :D :D
supernutjapan
Nov. 21st, 2018 07:29 am (UTC)
Remember the bad sex you've had? Yeah, I know that flaming face you must be having as you write. Make it flame bb. The more embarrassed you are for them, the better it is XD
roxymissrose
Nov. 22nd, 2018 03:05 am (UTC)
Shuuuuuh, girl! What chu talkin' about, bad sex????


LOL!!! Hmmmmm...I'm not trying to make people laugh...because my bad sex? Comedy gold! :D :D :D
supernutjapan
Nov. 22nd, 2018 03:26 am (UTC)
Hehehe😆

Hmmm... Are you trying to make people sad? If not, I'd say go with the comedy, or at least the warm fuzzies remembering younger years feels.

Usually it's one getting off early, or uncomfortable insert or even too much lube 😆or some such . I totally see Jared doing either and Jensen being all, it's ok Jared pets/ouch or them both falling into a fit of giggles.

Poison ivy if outside, getting found if in room - someone barging in at a bad time,
weird stuff getting stuck places...

Depends on what your goal is I guess. Do they get closer for it, or... not 😢


Good luck!😆

Edited at 2018-11-22 03:36 am (UTC)
roxymissrose
Nov. 22nd, 2018 04:47 am (UTC)
My goal is to make people really, really sad--it's for the This Small Dark Place story.

Though one day I'm using every bit of your comment for a fic, because I'm going to need to write some silly business, for sure! ♥

Thank you, love!
fanspired
Nov. 21st, 2018 08:32 am (UTC)
I'm feeling sad already and I haven't even read it yet :...(
roxymissrose
Nov. 22nd, 2018 03:06 am (UTC)
Oh girl...*hugs you in advance*
tabaqui
Nov. 21st, 2018 07:58 pm (UTC)
None whatsoever.
*runs screaming*



The grand-mini-you better get used to grandma's weird ways! :D
roxymissrose
Nov. 22nd, 2018 03:07 am (UTC)
LOL!!

You know?

"Okay, little bird, here's something you need to know...your Grandmama is not like other Grandmamas."
tabaqui
Nov. 22nd, 2018 03:10 am (UTC)
*dies laughing*
fufaraw
Nov. 22nd, 2018 06:09 am (UTC)
Oh dear. I've got nothing worthwhile to tell you. When it got to the point, I just couldn't. I had to sketch it in a flashback.

But you've gotten some really good advice here, so I'ma just shut up, back off, and let you do what you do.

(Um, maybe do it a little faster? I'm sorry, was that pushy? Ne'mind, I'll just be over here, in the corner out of the way. Waiting.)
roxymissrose
Nov. 22nd, 2018 06:24 am (UTC)
I'm at almost 5000 words, and pretty sure I'll get it posted by Tuesday. For me, that's fast as all get out! ;D

It's coming together--slowly, but I think I got the right tone for it. *wipes forehead* Whew! Now, I'm gonna have to figure out how to tag this thing. :(
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